Through dark streets I ride
where cones of amber intersect the dark
In the distance dogs bark
And in gardens hedgehogs hide
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nice little write here, i find the night a mystical time and full of wonderment, i feel the last verse could have been better but overall a very good write, the first and third verse were very strong and i reminded me of a Philip larking poem, very well done! ! !
Very well written - couldn't put it better - sounds like my daily commute from university back to he digs late after studying too hard (1)
First imagery is brought to life by your flowing lines. Great job