Thursday, September 19, 2013

Night Cruise On Lake Michigan Comments

Rating: 3.8

Standing on top of a skyscraper
one can no doubt pick the stars with ease
yet from here it seems more likely
that the stars descend from the sky themselves
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William Marr
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Roseann Shawiak 23 January 2016

Enjoyed the imagery, it felt like I was on the cruise experiencing everything you described. Really great poem, William! Give it a 10! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Adeline Foster 02 October 2013

I like this poem, it speakes of open space. Read mine - Wide Open Spaces - Adeline

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