~night Creeps Comments

A brief little beauty, with great simplicity. Smooth and even soothing. Read my'Perhaps A Dream'

Thoughtful little poem. In the end the final sleep lifts all our burdens left undone.

The title is a little misleading ;) I though I was going to be a 'Spooooky' poem, but instead I found it to be lovely and serene like a lullaby. I love your use of rhyme and the rhythm was soothing. Very nice.