Night Creature Comments

Ooooh! What a darky poemy this is loved the final lines, gave me goosies lol! 10 for the chilli's Best of health and happiness Jon.

Dee, Everything was just fine, until that last sentence, THEN, I got really scared! :)

wow, what a creepy poem! i love it. love starr

You would protect me no Dee? , I scared..........................have a nice night dave xxx

Great insperation......but I'm still lost great rite

I've heard it said that you are the Siren of the Night. Not sure if that refers to your poetry, though... ; -) -chuck

Silly girl, you brighten up the day.

Very cleverly done, I find this quite physiologically scarey, but very creative writing indeed Thank you for sharing your art Love Duncan X