Monday, January 30, 2006

Night Can'T Wait For Summer Comments

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Huge clumps of homogenous night
Don’t you need a holiday?

Haven’t you run out of twisted delight for keeping my sleep at bay?
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Lea Simpson
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Solomon Brook 30 January 2006

Decent rest has been earned over here too, I believe. But I just have a big problem with spending it. But I'm-a learn'n. Good contribution, thanks.

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Elya Thorn 30 January 2006

This is such an amazing work, thank you for sharing it with us! It's so good... the feeling of it, and the way you wrote it, ... not to mention the great ending! Beautiful! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Graham Jones 30 January 2006

I can't wait either, I liked your poem it has a nice flow to it, and its an unusual subject well done : -)

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