Monday, September 7, 2009

Night Breaking To Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

night is slipping by,
darkness is stepping down
nocturnal dreams break
to usher in the morning light,
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ritty patnaik
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Raj Nandy 14 September 2009

Your last stanza coveys the message very well in poetic language! 10! -Raj

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Ejaz Khan 09 September 2009

It seems you're already missing dreams, perhaps a bit of daydreaming may cheer you up. Very good write Ritty, very refreshing, very thought provoking, indded this alternation is great!

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Saadat Tahir 07 September 2009

beautiful musings... and yes u convey the lazy ruminantion so well... sitting... rocking and thinking...with a smile maybe... hey get another coffee... ;) very well written and rfeltive lines cheers

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