night is slipping by,
darkness is stepping down
nocturnal dreams break
to usher in the morning light,
...
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It seems you're already missing dreams, perhaps a bit of daydreaming may cheer you up. Very good write Ritty, very refreshing, very thought provoking, indded this alternation is great!
beautiful musings... and yes u convey the lazy ruminantion so well... sitting... rocking and thinking...with a smile maybe... hey get another coffee... ;) very well written and rfeltive lines cheers
Your last stanza coveys the message very well in poetic language! 10! -Raj