Night Blues Comments

An original slant on the blues going thru the night and 'Take a little mercy where I can' Some very relativeness here as we all have the blues sometime +++10 regards

Smoky you have grown so much in your poetic spirit. I think you are the premier poet on this site, your work continues to amaze me. Wonderful stuff. Easily a ten.

There's some unforgettable lines in here, such as 'Arise distant and dark moon Open despairs tomb-'- totally awesome, and the last lines sort of gave me a chill- like someone walking on graves in the future- our future, if you know what I mean. I can hear someone singing this one, almost. ;)

You can't beat the blues. A really great poem.

like this one a lot... mercy, and the blues! well done!