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In a lonely night
Beholding the lonely moon,
But in my sight;
Not alone, a poetic boon.
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Jagdish Singh Ramana
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me poet yeps poet 19 February 2022

THANK YOU FRIEND MISSING YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS WHERE HV U BEEN

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2021

Loneliness gives me wide option to speculate different things in length and breadth.... brilliant

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me poet yeps poet 10 January 2021

NIGHT WILL B onely if u don't follow me where bro u hv been

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me poet yeps poet 26 December 2020

NICE WORDS UR RAMANA JI..Ishq ko yuñ gulab ki tarah mahakne do/ ashiane'ñ na torho chirhioñ ki chahakne do|. ON MY POETRY...LOL

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Dr. Antony Theodore 26 December 2020

In a weary mood, I count stars Some peeping into the young tree, A star falls down into the dark And hides when I long to see. BEautiful poem. simply beautiful my dear poet Jagdisch singh. thank you. tony

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me poet yeps poet 25 December 2020

PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE IT TAKES TIME TO DEVELOP IT DO TRY FOLKS PPME

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Ravi Kopra 02 May 2020

rateeN jadoN main ikola honda haaN asal wich ikola main nahin honda ikolapan mera saath dendi hai oh day naal vicharaaN which main dub paindaN. Write first in the language in which your well versed.

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you sir fir this beautiful comment. This poem is one of my earlier poems I have written maybe In 2016. I see myself growing. Yes The Mother Tongue is the beautiful and great language of a person; a spontaneous flow! I've written number of Punjabi Nazms. Never posted on the websites.

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Ravi Kopra 02 May 2020

Forced ryhyming doesn't make good poetry. Rhyming is not poetry. Let your thoughs flow. Write freely. Your mother tongue, I believe, is Punjabi. See here how your poem sounds in Punjabi.

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Anjandev Roy 18 March 2020

Loneliness gives me wide opinion........magnificent. anjandev roy.

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Manpreet Singh 10 February 2020

Its great to see you maturing by time. I think longer lines can help you capture more meaning and imagery in your poetry. But nice work, keep up.

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Thank you veere, for your inspiring comment. It matters.

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Chinedu Dike 19 October 2019

A poignant rendition nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation.

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A B Faniki 01 September 2019

Greate write and lovely rhyme and rhythm. Cheers

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Rajnish Manga 12 March 2019

Loneliness gives me wide opinion For that is my real companion... //.... Brilliant poem with a moving landscape of night sky. This shows your master stroke while working on nature. Thanks a lot.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 March 2019

Nature motivates us for love and love makes us beautiful. A wonderful poem.

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Thank you again, sir!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2019

Nature could fill the void we feel inside our hearts. Its wonders and beauty fuel our mind to soar. A beautiful poem with great imagery.

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thanku you, mam! my pleasure!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 February 2019

very nice I WISH I had met you in BIKANEER when i visited ur place your line when I DO IT ALONE do what alone? ? ? ? ? ? nice poem ji wahe guru

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 06 February 2019

thank you for such lovely line. our hearts are here in poem hunter world. we meet here.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 27 January 2019

thanks a lot commenting on my poem. your precious views are encouragement for me to write more good and meaningful. thanks all of you!

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Amir Marandi 25 January 2019

Loneliness gives me wide opinion For that is my real companion Such a strong display of emotions. Great poem. I hope the twinkling dare' of stars brightens your travelling path.

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Jennifer Birchall 21 January 2019

Lovely picture you painted with your words Jagdish. Wonderful poem.

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Prabir Gayen 20 January 2019

Very good poem with subtle thought.....thanks

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