In a lonely night
Beholding the lonely moon,
But in my sight;
Not alone, a poetic boon.
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Loneliness gives me wide option to speculate different things in length and breadth.... brilliant
NIGHT WILL B onely if u don't follow me where bro u hv been
NICE WORDS UR RAMANA JI..Ishq ko yuñ gulab ki tarah mahakne do/ ashiane'ñ na torho chirhioñ ki chahakne do|. ON MY POETRY...LOL
In a weary mood, I count stars Some peeping into the young tree, A star falls down into the dark And hides when I long to see. BEautiful poem. simply beautiful my dear poet Jagdisch singh. thank you. tony
PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE IT TAKES TIME TO DEVELOP IT DO TRY FOLKS PPME
rateeN jadoN main ikola honda haaN asal wich ikola main nahin honda ikolapan mera saath dendi hai oh day naal vicharaaN which main dub paindaN. Write first in the language in which your well versed.
you sir fir this beautiful comment. This poem is one of my earlier poems I have written maybe In 2016. I see myself growing. Yes The Mother Tongue is the beautiful and great language of a person; a spontaneous flow! I've written number of Punjabi Nazms. Never posted on the websites.
Forced ryhyming doesn't make good poetry. Rhyming is not poetry. Let your thoughs flow. Write freely. Your mother tongue, I believe, is Punjabi. See here how your poem sounds in Punjabi.
Loneliness gives me wide opinion........magnificent. anjandev roy.
Its great to see you maturing by time. I think longer lines can help you capture more meaning and imagery in your poetry. But nice work, keep up.
A poignant rendition nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation.
Loneliness gives me wide opinion For that is my real companion... //.... Brilliant poem with a moving landscape of night sky. This shows your master stroke while working on nature. Thanks a lot.
Nature motivates us for love and love makes us beautiful. A wonderful poem.
Nature could fill the void we feel inside our hearts. Its wonders and beauty fuel our mind to soar. A beautiful poem with great imagery.
very nice I WISH I had met you in BIKANEER when i visited ur place your line when I DO IT ALONE do what alone? ? ? ? ? ? nice poem ji wahe guru
thank you for such lovely line. our hearts are here in poem hunter world. we meet here.
thanks a lot commenting on my poem. your precious views are encouragement for me to write more good and meaningful. thanks all of you!
Loneliness gives me wide opinion For that is my real companion Such a strong display of emotions. Great poem. I hope the twinkling dare' of stars brightens your travelling path.
Lovely picture you painted with your words Jagdish. Wonderful poem.
THANK YOU FRIEND MISSING YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS WHERE HV U BEEN