Night And Day Comments

When dawn breaks the birds optimism brings hope to this earth. You are true in expression and natural imagery is brought up alive in this poem. An interesting sharing! ..10

When dawn breaks the birds optimism brings hope to this earth, With their enthusiastic song, as light shimmers across every land, Wildness of the sea cast it's great performance, Of birth and death always about, Tides of life drawing in and drawing out. Great poem, like a necklace of words with shine of pearls......................................10

Hazel as always you have written straight from the heart where all the best poetry comes from.

What words you have folded together love the feeling in your words

Night and Day as whole complete my 24hours..i love the story the insight you have inside and all words just lovely..you are a craftman hazel_Soul

its phenomenal, you rock hazel. a ten for it. its a perfect blend of beautiful lines and fabulous imagery. :)

a peom of life's life's cruelness buetifully expressed in astonishing diction. your poem of Nature in addition with cruelness paint d true image of poetry. NICE work. a master piece

Can I face eternity with my borrowed mask's. Such beauty in each every line I love the way your poems slide around the mouth and drip off the tongue when spoken out loud. Beautiful 10/10 BB : 0D 0D

Very true said, can I face my mortality with my borrowed mask's. life is cruel. Loved reading each lines. A beautiful poem.

Life is cruel - beautifully written poem of yearning. A great write Hazel.