Night, And Dawn Comments

fantastic piece of poetry

Silver skill weaves dreams of poetry. Shine on, Will.

i was afraid this would be too hopeful/delusioned. but, it wasnt! kept on a visioned track (and gave me goosebumps) . 'silver waters that i might have slept in.' hope you are well. been away for too long. care, sjg

A beautifully paced poem whose elegant language gracefully describes the thought process itself. Wonderfully done! Robert

Beautifully done, Will... eerie, and at the same time, inspiring. Great write! ! Brian

wonderful verse that flows easily into a marvelous ending. magnificent work, Will, and another of my favs. -Tailor

Very beautiful.Will. Your music for the night is awesome and inspiring. From such fey dreams a poem can be woven. Warm regards, Sandra

I love this poem Will, but I'm sure I commented on it before. Melvina

Simply breathtaking Will. I liked it even better this time. Wow!

A new dawn for WB with old ghosts and dreams receding westward? ? Having read this poem again..it still instills a sense of awe and wonder.Amazing work. Love...TO