Thursday, September 11, 2008

Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

The night haunts me with her burden of words,
weighed down by their own unutterence.
Thoughts form and crumble.
I watch silently, say nothing.
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 November 2008

Great imagery; nicely woven feelings. Somehow got similarities with my poems MY DARK NIGHTS & DILETTANTISH HUNGER. Very well penned. 'weighed dwn by their own unutterence' was classic.........10

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Pooja Ladyluck 25 October 2008

1dum mast......gr8.....truly 'darkness leads the way'.......u hav beautifully expressed.......the way i feel.........thanx

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Tj Becker 19 September 2008

A nice write, night to some is a time to be yourself, and have no demands on as the day seems to be the ruler of our lives. Well done Sarvesh I enjoy your works.

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Indira Babbellapati 12 September 2008

don't give place to such pathos at this age, dear sarvesh...ponder on the brighter side of night n day...sure u'll find a booty!

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Kesav Easwaran 11 September 2008

good write, sarvesh...replace 'its' in the first line with 'her'...9 for you for this poem

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