At night I lie in the grass,
Starring into the deathly black sky,
As dark as the blackest ink,
Yet as smooth as the softest silk,
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The enchantment of night is a beautiful theme we can all relate too and praise. THis is utterly a fantastic poem in wvery sense of the word, it brings to mind celestiality and other deep beautiful aspects of darkness. definitely a 10
As they Dance their solos around me, And they turn the night into Magic. I like these lines. I like the ending too it is very good. good job. *Purkey Girl*
lets lay in the dark and what the fireflies :) lol jk although that was very nice and i loved it :)
a very beautiful poem nicely done with the combination of rrhymes....thanks
Hey Angel, this is a geart poem keep up the beautiful work that your doin.
WOW, WOW! BEAUTY, i love it.its a 100..going in my fav's.
i could call u, natures finger for u have a wonderful mastery of nature, i like the poem and its devices, kip on for u will make the Shakespeare of our time..