Thursday, August 7, 2008

Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

At night I lie in the grass,
Starring into the deathly black sky,
As dark as the blackest ink,
Yet as smooth as the softest silk,
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angel lockheart
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Eric Ekinde 12 July 2011

i could call u, natures finger for u have a wonderful mastery of nature, i like the poem and its devices, kip on for u will make the Shakespeare of our time..

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Kyle Jones 23 August 2009

The enchantment of night is a beautiful theme we can all relate too and praise. THis is utterly a fantastic poem in wvery sense of the word, it brings to mind celestiality and other deep beautiful aspects of darkness. definitely a 10

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<font color=black>Nagourta 25 January 2009

'The magik of starlight is endless.' -Nagourta

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*Trusting You* 11 November 2008

As they Dance their solos around me, And they turn the night into Magic. I like these lines. I like the ending too it is very good. good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Ryan Thompson 08 October 2008

lets lay in the dark and what the fireflies :) lol jk although that was very nice and i loved it :)

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Aijaz Asif 18 September 2008

a very beautiful poem nicely done with the combination of rrhymes....thanks

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Hooray for you!

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Lori Cowan 20 August 2008

Hey Angel, this is a geart poem keep up the beautiful work that your doin.

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Subham Dutta 20 August 2008

Hi Angel Lockheart, Great poem.

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Coach Roth 14 August 2008

Wonderful imagery...Coach

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WOW, WOW! BEAUTY, i love it.its a 100..going in my fav's.

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