Saturday, June 29, 2019

Night Comments

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One sleepless night, squandering in my bed,
Flashing the torch, out of my blanket's net
The gleaming white, despersing in my eyes.
Through rustling of pines,
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Sunil Shandilya
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 September 2019

NIGHTS IN SHIMLA ARE SEXY TELL ME FRIENDS SO MANY NOW USE THE LATEST PILL U WON'T FOR AN HOUR STANDSTILL THEY SAY CAN'T TR AT 80

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Mehak anand 29 July 2019

Thinking, how we ended up here

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 July 2019

The night is young when you have someone to hold on when tis cold and you are getting old Then she comes to play as you lay life proceeds in the same way for all we call human and learnt the passing of the lonely night by animals who taught and teach us so much still that's natures will

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 July 2019

nice but why do u need a torch say what happened after the night fall more gals and guys need to follow u after all read more my romanticas also great poet

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Sunil Shandilya 10 July 2019

Thanks for finding time to read my poem. I used " flashing the torch" as an expression to my insomnia, more like lying in the bed not able to sleep and thus fiddling with things, say a torch in this case,

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Chinedu Dike 30 June 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Sunil.

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Sunil Shandilya 10 July 2019

Thanks, Chinedu, your aprraisal means a lot.

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