Tuesday, September 12, 2017

Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see a beautiful bride in a palanquin
In a bridal dress her hidden charms!
It's Moon the only carrier of it
With a pleasing load on his arms.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 25 April 2018

Just before the dawn! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 01 March 2018

Lovely metaphor used Aktharji..enjoyed reading

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 September 2017

Just before the dawn on the gates The bride came out as a morning star Being hugged by the groom, her sun, Disappeared to appear as evening star. A classic poem of a charming bride! A beautiful Moon hugging her handsome groom the Sun! Akhtar Sahab, a 100 for you! :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2017

In a palanquin this beautiful bride appears. She is so much charming that bridal dress are hidden in front of her charm. With a pleasing load she is moon now. Just before the dawn on the gates the bride comes out as a morning star. Naughty wind removes the curtains and clouds hide her beauty for a while.An interesting and wise imagery is drawn in this brilliant poem. Night moon is well described as beautiful bride and this poem is metaphorically and humorously presented. Excellent! ...10

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