Friday, November 6, 2015

Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sound of sparrows
And the sound of flight
Fills the horror of the night!
And the spooky silence of the tree
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Afrooz Jafarinoor
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 December 2015

Can one get free? for me this poem speaks of some kind of a mystery. a mystery of the night, suffering on the bed of disease and the quest to become free. thank you very much. very nice poem. tony

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Rahman Henry 06 November 2015

I like to vote: 10++++++++++++++++++ ........

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 06 November 2015

It's so generous of you!

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Rahman Henry 06 November 2015

None can get free...... great poem!

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 06 November 2015

This is a rather old poem of mine. I don't remember exactly how I was feeling at the time, but it seems that you are in the same mood now! Thanks for your comment and tell me more of your feeling at present! I could remember some details!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2015

The sound of sparrows And the sound of flight Fills the horror of the night! ..Really wonderfully you have expressed every line on night poem shared...10

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Shakil Ahmed 06 November 2015

you write very well, you express your thoughts very beautifully, well penned poem, thanks for sharing, it you find time please read some of my poems and leave your commens,

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