Friday, May 30, 2014

Night Comments

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The night is dark,
Deep,
And enshrouding.
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Sana Olivia Hernandez
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Daniel Brick 01 June 2014

This is wonderful! Every line gives us unique take on the image of night and related images. You are NOT recycling clichés but giving us a fresh look because it's personal and takes us beyond the superficial observation. A CRUEL COMFORT. / A DEVIOUS DELIGHT is a charged couplet. It doesn't deny night can bring comfort and delight but it forces us to see more, see deeper.And the closing section is so vivid - and brings closure which I was not expecting as human emotions FADE as night conveys MERCY. Perfect ending, no need for another word.

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Sana Olivia Hernandez

Sana Olivia Hernandez

Roseburg, Oregon
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