At night
I can feel your love
in the room
floating over me
...
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most charming poem as slowly coursed yet with all the beauties of love, i appreciate, Pia - it is lovely one, well written, as i give credit of 10+, thanks for sharing
Kinda makes your toes curl up just reading it. A little wine always helps set the mood too...: o)
Uniquely blended love in night, beautiful one, -i can feel your love
Oh, this is so sweet, a feeling of love in the night, how wonderfully romantic. I love it Pia---Melvina---
I confess - I periodically come back to read you here... just to look if did write any new! ! ! I wonder how I did miss reading this one..... It is still a mystery how you did stop writing! ! Your writings are very refreshing and one does look forward to the next one.... This indeed is a GEM... The nostalgic feeling of the night captured with charm and emotions.
Charming and bit nostalgic! ...........Night you feel more things and see flying angels. The obstacle is horrible wake up with the light? I really enjoyed your love poem.
A feeling of home, being as one with the one you love, expressed so well I am really enjoying your art Pia Love duncan X
simply stunning, and gets the idea across beautifully. i, too, have a poem titled Night, but its very different from yours. its so cool to read poems that have the same title but different meanings. :)
It's a short beauty! You can read my poem called **Night**! it's longer than yours though~ Preets
wow, wonderful lines fantasist