Saturday, August 8, 2015

Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

Darkness descends suddenly,
A soft ebony mantle
Covering the weary earth.
Starlight in the heavens
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Valerie Hutchinson-morgan
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A creative and compelling composition that is skillfully crafted! Well done my friend!

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Chinedu Dike 02 September 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Valerie.

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Geoffrey Fafard 10 August 2015

good poetry…travelling with all its intricate corners -dangerous and challenging, are wrapped in this work.I like it.Just maybe it will spur me on …if nothing else then at least in my mind.great write..Ta.

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Sekharan Pookkat 09 August 2015

Night slowly entered into courtyard and veranda shadows longed to bed and drowned in dreams- thanks for sharing

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