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This is a Cry of the Heart. It is the most universal human desire: to be partnered with a person who fulfills YOUR heart's desire and his too, so that the relationship is reciprocal. But your poem does not tell a story of that fulfillment but thoroughly details a crushing sense of loss. Its honesty cannot be disputed. This poem expresses a universal sympathy. It reminds me of something Beethoven wrote above the notes of his last string quartet: MUST IT BE SO? //YES, IT MUST BE SO.

LOve, Pain, struggle, disappointment, desire. you are painting words and giving expression to your images of your artistic eye from a real experience. tony

oooooh! ! ! Wow....Brilliant! ! ! you did write A poem! ! i felt strange...u made something completely different! ! i don't usually feel like this...a perfect one! thanks dear Negar! it was my first time to read ur poems and i did enjoy: D

The imagery painted by your words is great and also very poetic, nicely written.

Well done, a really peaceful poem to me, i think for others too..thanks for inviting me for your smooth flowing poem's lines..keep writing, you will be greater soon, and read Ellias (below) he is good...you two can write a poem together but best to write in persian with him! _Soul

it's just nice. i have a special feeling about this work..something familiar..but i have a question that i cant ask well written.

You write very well. It is a mature poem and a good write. Read some of mine.