Saturday, June 2, 2012
Night Comments
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As I lay there In the shadows
I see the creatures circle me
I know they're here for my soul
But I refuse to hand it over
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Damein Taylor
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Godfrey Morris
04 June 2012
Very descriptive and imaginative piece. Please continue writting
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7/30/2025 5:55:52 AM # 1.0.0
I'd second what Godfrey said, definitely keep going man. Probably what I enjoyed most is that you didn't feel the need to rhyme every single line; there's a place for that, but it's not a necessity to poetry.