Night Comments

With all the lovely imagery of nature you have a beautiful poem here tingling the heart with beautiful memories of love and its fascinating charm.. Thanks for sharing.

when the two legged half witted... materialistic creatures close thier doors. the perpetual silence reigns. The traitor heart betrays me again... Human condition when in l ove expressed in an original way. It is very attractive to see how everyone sees the reality Of love differently. Thank you dear poet. tony

The use of pauses in this really supports the imagery in this, while also adding the feeling of reflection. It really does feel like night in this poem and the cold air can almost be felt.

great love der Aakash, go on writing, keep contact.

Why have you used the letter N instead of And? It lets this otherwise fine poem down on the very last line!