Night Comments

Beautiful Poem.... :) Your poems have a well defined sweetness

Such a cheery poem. Delightful!

i am the 5th to rate here and i rated it 10

Nice write but i feel it hadn't done enough justice to its title.

oh that is the boundary of our time for all our works to trudge the path of of life, beautiful write, i0+, thanks for sharing

YOU WROTE WHAT YOU SAW AND WHAT YOU SEE, AND THAT'S THE WAY IT'S GOT TO BE. GOOD START FROM THE HEART.

simple and touching. nice, shan

Well written..bit confusion in the title though. But that doesn't matter 'coz the rest of the words was all right. Carry on girl..: -)

This is a very beautifully written poem and you did a very good job. Try to work on your spelling Wassila and your poetry will look much better. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for the invite. Your friend Lynn

Keep on writing dear daughter and it's nice, you see more things in the night.

A very innocent effort my friend, the many a kind I love to read.I am quite prone to mistakes myself..... thank god for editors :) . Keep up the good work sunshine poet, I shall look forward to your next rise (Line) James

an impressing rendition. writing is said to be a daily thing. keep writing!

Nice to read your poem! Go on writing poems for further development in this line!

poetic and good imagery. ---------------- however, i think there is a typing error in this line: 'then say GoodBye and wait for th sky, ' i think it should be 'then say GoodBye and wait for the sky, ' typing errors are common. There are poems of mine that also have them and i wish someday i can spare a time to review all of my poems and correct all grammars, spellings, and other... God bless... Advanced Merry Christmas!

hi.. welcome to the bright sky.. a new poem has shined on the planet of poetry.. wish you good luck..