At night, everything take a rest.
The birds are silent in their nest.
Humans take a break after doing their best.
And the child sleeps next to his mother's breast.
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At night, people deeply sleep however the sun gradually creeps. The moon sits and smiles on the night And the stars join it with delight. ya nights are beautiful and lovely and i share your feeelings Merna.. long time but beautiful your poems.....10 read mine virginitry at stake... parting ways....no separate ways
mmm..ok..i liked the last two lines the most, it's very simple & meaningful one.10++
'At night, everything take a rest. The birds are silent in their nest. Humans take a break after doing their best. And the child sleeps next to his mother's breast.' Beautiful description. Wonderful rhyme. Night...I love that. Enjoyed reading it 10+
A beautiful night it is to have a view at, and I love your adorable view at the enchanting night.
wow! what a beautiful description! your Pen designed in my Mind a poetic night! the rhyme is wonderful, you write with zeal! ! ! keep it up! I liked your NIGHT 10+++++ Thanks For Sharing/
you are a very talented poet! i am looking forward to reading more of your work
oh! ! unfortunately i sleep in the beginning of the night and i don't live meditating like you.....keep meditating and tell me what you will find.......good poem!
another nice poem about night.. i like your clever remarks.. you could simply express the '' good-everthing'' in night.. i think you have the power to post an amazing poem about day-time, soon.. once again, i enjoyed reading this nice piece.. thanks4sharing.. P.S: you don't need to replace any words, just look for your new poem.
I am so proud of you Merna. This is beautiful!
It sounds like a beauiful nursery rhyme. Well done, Merna Ibrahim.
YOU CREATE NOCTURAL INCIDENTS IN SUPERB MANNER. I GIVE YOU 10/10
Merma, a very nice poem.....happy nights when angels bless and erase the depression........good, good, good, I wish I have them.......Please take a look at my poem MY DARK NIGHTS, quite opposite....................nights I have........
Merma, great piece, well penned, listen to John Knight, he is a great talented poet and he means well, you got my vote 10+. Love and Peace, Romeo, keep it up!
The feet of angels are bright, They finish their mission at night. Unseen they pour blessing, And erase any depressing. night, angels, sleep, beauty of the night, peace of the night and rest. beautiful reflections on night. thank you dear poetess.for this fine poem on NIght. tony