Friday, October 16, 2009

Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

At night, everything take a rest.
The birds are silent in their nest.
Humans take a break after doing their best.
And the child sleeps next to his mother's breast.
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merna ibrahim
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 July 2017

The feet of angels are bright, They finish their mission at night. Unseen they pour blessing, And erase any depressing. night, angels, sleep, beauty of the night, peace of the night and rest. beautiful reflections on night. thank you dear poetess.for this fine poem on NIght. tony

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 February 2010

At night, people deeply sleep however the sun gradually creeps. The moon sits and smiles on the night And the stars join it with delight. ya nights are beautiful and lovely and i share your feeelings Merna.. long time but beautiful your poems.....10 read mine virginitry at stake... parting ways....no separate ways

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Zeinab Sherif 27 November 2009

mmm..ok..i liked the last two lines the most, it's very simple & meaningful one.10++

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 November 2009

'At night, everything take a rest. The birds are silent in their nest. Humans take a break after doing their best. And the child sleeps next to his mother's breast.' Beautiful description. Wonderful rhyme. Night...I love that. Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Obinna Eruchie 09 November 2009

A beautiful night it is to have a view at, and I love your adorable view at the enchanting night.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 06 November 2009

wow! what a beautiful description! your Pen designed in my Mind a poetic night! the rhyme is wonderful, you write with zeal! ! ! keep it up! I liked your NIGHT 10+++++ Thanks For Sharing/

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Blue Eyes 30 October 2009

nivce rhyme, i liked the poem in general.

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Ahmed Abdalla 30 October 2009

great use of words. i love it :)

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Akram Awadat 29 October 2009

oh merna it is very beautiful poem, i like it 10+

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Emma Adamyan 29 October 2009

i felt this poem like slight caress. it`s so sweet

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Pia Andersson 25 October 2009

you are a very talented poet! i am looking forward to reading more of your work

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Omar Ibrahim 22 October 2009

oh! ! unfortunately i sleep in the beginning of the night and i don't live meditating like you.....keep meditating and tell me what you will find.......good poem!

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The Lost.. 22 October 2009

this is wonderfull..and the rhyme is wonderful too :)

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

nice descriptive poem about nature, lovely to read.10+++++

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HaZeM PaKKaR 20 October 2009

another nice poem about night.. i like your clever remarks.. you could simply express the '' good-everthing'' in night.. i think you have the power to post an amazing poem about day-time, soon.. once again, i enjoyed reading this nice piece.. thanks4sharing.. P.S: you don't need to replace any words, just look for your new poem.

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I am so proud of you Merna. This is beautiful!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 18 October 2009

It sounds like a beauiful nursery rhyme. Well done, Merna Ibrahim.

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Sanjib Das 18 October 2009

YOU CREATE NOCTURAL INCIDENTS IN SUPERB MANNER. I GIVE YOU 10/10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 October 2009

Merma, a very nice poem.....happy nights when angels bless and erase the depression........good, good, good, I wish I have them.......Please take a look at my poem MY DARK NIGHTS, quite opposite....................nights I have........

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Romeo Della Valle 18 October 2009

Merma, great piece, well penned, listen to John Knight, he is a great talented poet and he means well, you got my vote 10+. Love and Peace, Romeo, keep it up!

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