His name was Malcolm,
he hustled next to me
behind the counter of
beloved Martindale's.
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if you must use a racial epithet, at least use it within a poem that is truly a poem and one thats sensible, creative, lyrical and pointed; not this hackneyed, chopped up, poor prose with a cliche trope and a weak, probably untrue excuse to use a racial slur. I'd have given this...errr...group of words less than a one, but negative numbers arent used on the system. you're living proof that the top 500 hundred poet list is based purely on blind hits and not actually talent.
Thanks Liam, for the support. I think this citizen Kane must be black, some of these minorities are very touchy about things. But you are right, I looked at two of her poems and must say AchDuLieberGott. It's those who can't........ Are you right in Geneva or a suburb? If in Geneva, go find Hunzikergasse and you will come to a Butcher Shop which has the best smoked hams outside of the Fatherland. Best wishes Herbert