Tuesday, June 21, 2005

Nigger Malcolm * Comments

Rating: 2.4

His name was Malcolm,
he hustled next to me
behind the counter of
beloved Martindale's.
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Herbert Nehrlich1 21 June 2005

Thanks Liam, for the support. I think this citizen Kane must be black, some of these minorities are very touchy about things. But you are right, I looked at two of her poems and must say AchDuLieberGott. It's those who can't........ Are you right in Geneva or a suburb? If in Geneva, go find Hunzikergasse and you will come to a Butcher Shop which has the best smoked hams outside of the Fatherland. Best wishes Herbert

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Courtney Kane 21 June 2005

if you must use a racial epithet, at least use it within a poem that is truly a poem and one thats sensible, creative, lyrical and pointed; not this hackneyed, chopped up, poor prose with a cliche trope and a weak, probably untrue excuse to use a racial slur. I'd have given this...errr...group of words less than a one, but negative numbers arent used on the system. you're living proof that the top 500 hundred poet list is based purely on blind hits and not actually talent.

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