Thursday, October 1, 2015

Nigeria! The Dream Of Our Heroes Past Comments

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Living in pains and inferiority;
They dreamed to make a name.
Farming and eating on mines of indignity;
They persevered and beared the shame.
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Bakare Oluwagbenga Michael
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Chinedu Dike 07 February 2018

An insightful patriotic piece of poetry written in commemoration of Independence Day for Nigeria. Sober reflection on The Dream Of Our Heroes Past elegantly embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Bakare.

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Alex Owulo Ogoh 27 February 2016

Wow! Love the attributes you used and the twinning of word for the hero of the past. The rhythm togetherness with the imagery brought me to a final conclusion of truth the genuine sacrifice made by these past hero. Great write.

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Kelly Kurt 01 October 2015

A wonderful poem, Bakare, Happy independence day! Peace

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Thanks Sir...

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 01 October 2015

It is a good read! Read mine: Born And Christened On The 1st

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Ok sir

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Bakare Oluwagbenga Michael

Bakare Oluwagbenga Michael

Lagos, Nigeria.
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