Living in pains and inferiority;
They dreamed to make a name.
Farming and eating on mines of indignity;
They persevered and beared the shame.
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Wow! Love the attributes you used and the twinning of word for the hero of the past. The rhythm togetherness with the imagery brought me to a final conclusion of truth the genuine sacrifice made by these past hero. Great write.
It is a good read! Read mine: Born And Christened On The 1st
An insightful patriotic piece of poetry written in commemoration of Independence Day for Nigeria. Sober reflection on The Dream Of Our Heroes Past elegantly embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Bakare.