Saturday, August 16, 2008

Nicotine Comments

Rating: 5.0

Breathe-in loneliness, she came to me
Touch my lips with your emptiness

I putted down my head to accept her
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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

Wonderful poem. 10+

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<font color =fusha>Amy 14 September 2008

Great poem. Its about a vital issue and it is expressed well. Nicely done :)

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Ency Bearis 16 August 2008

a very nice advocate write against cancer causing stuff...well done.. Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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