Nickel Flight Comments
Shiny and twirling like a mad martin
Over a pond full of lazy mosquitoes
My nickel flipped end over end
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Love the metaphors; love the images; love the whole, in its engaging simplicity. Best wishes :) jack
This is a joyful expression of youthful exuberance and release. Your images are highly original and the couplet shaping works a treat. Love it! Allie xxxxxxxxxxxx
YoU CaN SuReLy STOp Me On A DiME, Tailor i LiGhT HoW YoU DiD ThIs)
LIIKE TH'COUPLET USAGE ON THIS SUCCINCT & EFFULGENT PIECE FJR
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7/30/2025 3:41:20 PM # 1.0.0
Another great feat of expression - giving the simplest thing the most compelling apparel - recovering in the process something of the freshness of childhood experience. Now, that is good poetry! jim