Wednesday, July 9, 2008

Nick's Last Night Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

Three young men leave the bar laughing
A forth sits alone on the curb
A six pack of beer is beside him
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Raymond Wright 16 July 2008

I am always excited to see new work from you and as always, I'm not dissapointed! A moving, sadly beautiful poem. You're the best!

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Viola Grey 10 July 2008

I really like the way you wrote this...lulled the reader into a false sense of security, then hit them with the last goodbye...great work.

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