Three young men leave the bar laughing
A forth sits alone on the curb
A six pack of beer is beside him
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I really like the way you wrote this...lulled the reader into a false sense of security, then hit them with the last goodbye...great work.
I am always excited to see new work from you and as always, I'm not dissapointed! A moving, sadly beautiful poem. You're the best!