Nice To Hear Poem by Zyw Zywa

Nice To Hear

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Our daughter is concerned
if she has time
and as long as there is no need to

so I say enthusiastically
'We went to the museum'
.....There I wondered

.....is he thinking about life
.....or the pigeon on the bare branch
.....in the showcase with dry leaves?

.....Is he perhaps dreaming
.....of flying away?
.....He just stood there

.....as stuffed, his skin
.....and lips are so white
.....that I'm afraid

.....to cook in the kitchen
.....while he lays the table
.....clumsily uncorks a bottle

.....on his birthday as if
.....he is doing it for the first time
.....and then falls down

.....without me hearing it
.....a nice death
.....they say

.....that may well be
.....but I already know
.....that I'm not ready for it anyway

'Nice mama, nice to hear
that you are doing well'

Sunday, November 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: old age
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"A pigeon sat on a branch reflecting on existence" (2014, Roy Andersson)

Collection "Moons"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 28 November 2018

as stuffed, his skin and lips are so white that I'm afraid....A pigeon sat on a branch reflecting on existence your poet's note and your poem. so fine dear poet. thank u. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 November 2018

No, I do not know MOONS, but this poem leaves a saddest impression, yes, indeed....old age....must that always be this sad? Imagining funerals with glee and happiness, they sing enchanting songs.....A true sad poem, but such a sweet daughter. This daughter makes the poem has a meaning, but the poetess did that. Yes, I know. Beautiful.

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Zywa Zywa 10 November 2018

Hello Sylvia, I'm making up a website for my poems, and I will let it be known when it is done far enough to be visited. Then you'll see the collections mentioned (such as Moons) , all of them unpublished up to now. Thanks for your interest.

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