Friday, July 7, 2006

Nice Guy Comments

Rating: 5.0

I haven't given up
Even though it's been so long
I thought we were perfect
But i guess i was wrong
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James S.
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Lesa K 08 July 2006

This one speaks of so much honesty and feelings from the heart. You do a great job of expressing your true feeling and emotion in your poetry. As Francesca said, I think the display of forgiveness and unselfishness makes this a very unique write. I can't wait to see more of your poetry!

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Francesca Johnson 08 July 2006

A poem which oozes love, support, unselfishness, forgiveness and understanding. A positive poem to start my day off. A nice read, John, thank you. Love, Fran xx

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Abigail Keller 07 July 2006

Stunning write. The second stanza was my favorite but the whole poem was quite good. ~Amber~

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