Tuesday, December 9, 2014

Nibbling Age And Time Comments

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Of nibbling age and time
Into the documents of verses
And
In to the heart
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Emmanuel George Cefai
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Daniel Brick 13 December 2014

You cite the HEART as the source of poetry rather than the mind or the soul, and that creates a special feeling-atmosphere in the poem itself. (Of course, there's No right answer here, it just depends on what atmosphere you aim for - are you emphasizing the intelligence of poets? The mind is their source; or is it their visionary intuition? then they're guided by the soul, etc.) This poem both laments the fall a civilization and celebrates the next one that replaces it. The vista, the perspective is too vast for human sorrow - It is an impersonal peerspective through which we can contemplate the recurring patterns of history - WITHOUT THOSE TEARS FOR HUMAN AFFAIRS THAT VERGIL SPOKE OF.

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Daniel Brick 13 December 2014

You cite the HEART as the source of poetry rather than the mind or the soul, and that creates a special feeling-atmosphere in the poem itself. (Of course, there's No right answer here, it just depends on what atmosphere you aim for - are you emphasizing the intelligence of poets? The mind is their source; or is it their visionary intuition? then they're guided by the soul, etc.) This poem both laments the fall a civilization and celebrates the next one that replaces it. The vista, the perspective is too vast for human sorrow - It is an impersonal peerspective through which we can contemplate the recurring patterns of history - WITHOUT THOSE TEARS FOR HUMAN AFFAIRS THAT VERGIL SPOKE OF.

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Emmanuel George Cefai

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