Friday, May 16, 2008

Nexus To Artistry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Amidst the noise, i hear you!
i retraced my steps...
beguiled but still
grateful for the unsought
...
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Alice Cuenca
COMMENTS
Onelia Avelar 19 June 2008

I like the fresh air of abstraction of your poem. It is very well penned and pleasant reading.

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Saint Cynosure 04 June 2008

your work is AWESOME

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Coach Roth 30 May 2008

It is the goal of the artist to 'penetrate' the energy of the universe, either simply or more complex...this poem flies...nice imagery and wording...Coach

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Sadiqullah Khan 30 May 2008

profound and very rich, , the nexus no doubt leads to poetic artistry, ,

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David Desantis 28 May 2008

Wow Candice, i've never read your stuff before. I disagree with greenwolfe's comments...poetry is not always about what is right in front of you, its about delving deep to find something. Other times it can even just be about the way words flow together or sound and mean nothing at all. I think its up to every writer to decide what they want to write about, and the main point should be to illicit feeling. This did from me. I thought it was excellent! 10/10

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Karen Palero 25 May 2008

wow...! f not b'coz of ur invitaxon i won't be able 2 read diz beautiful poem..! it's so great...! it's kinda connected 2 d oder poem i had read b4..it was actually about 'when poetry touched my life'....and urs s actually an almost-perfect description on how 8 touched my lyf..

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 May 2008

The writing is a too vague for the average reader. This makes any evaluation difficult because anything this open to interpretation cannot be judged fairly. The absolute purpose is unknown. Therefore, the artistry is also. GW62

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Analou Pabalate 24 May 2008

great! artistically made.........

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Melvin Banggollay 23 May 2008

Definitely dear apple of my heart this is a superb expression of your sublime thoughts and emotions. A great poem for me... thanks and I love you, melvin

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Marvin Brato 22 May 2008

A fine artistic poetry filled with passion and substance..soothing to the mind of poets delving what to express! Liked it too, share more! A 10.

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Francesca Martin 19 May 2008

Thank you for the invitation :) This is wonderful.. definitely has a great feel. Your word choice is careful and precise, I like it a lot!

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bjanka im 19 May 2008

...I like this one....one of my favorites....flying so gracefull with it s subtile lines as a little bird enjoying her freedom...thanks...

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Fahim Sayed 17 May 2008

Nice words friend..... I had to read it twice to understand the feeling in it.

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Sandra Fowler 16 May 2008

May your winged spirit continue to soar! Lovely write. Warmesr regards, Sandra

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 May 2008

your true artistry has prevails. your touch of words is very fine. good job pal.

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