Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, October 30, 2014

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Our system allow
The illiteracy to grow
He can be head of space technology
Whereas he can't find place in zoo (logy)
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2014

Puzzling. the avoidance of grammatical endings and articles makes it sound choppy and forced. Random rhyme, random prosody. Very chaotic and unpleasant sound to this. The message is also troubling, a little cryptic, almost like the whole thing is a partially decrypted transmission. It is well done to serve the apparent purpose, well crafted, but i can't say it's enjoyable or made me think of something in a new way. This one may have gone over my head, I'm afraid.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2014

ok Desmond Washington8 minutes ago Ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2014

Our system allow The illiteracy to grow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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