Puzzling. the avoidance of grammatical endings and articles makes it sound choppy and forced. Random rhyme, random prosody. Very chaotic and unpleasant sound to this. The message is also troubling, a little cryptic, almost like the whole thing is a partially decrypted transmission. It is well done to serve the apparent purpose, well crafted, but i can't say it's enjoyable or made me think of something in a new way. This one may have gone over my head, I'm afraid.
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Puzzling. the avoidance of grammatical endings and articles makes it sound choppy and forced. Random rhyme, random prosody. Very chaotic and unpleasant sound to this. The message is also troubling, a little cryptic, almost like the whole thing is a partially decrypted transmission. It is well done to serve the apparent purpose, well crafted, but i can't say it's enjoyable or made me think of something in a new way. This one may have gone over my head, I'm afraid.