Thursday, June 19, 2008

Next To You Comments

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My eyes drag open, at midnights dark,
And there I am, next to you,
In your face, I see a spark,
Deep is the love I feel for you,
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Danny Taylor
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Jurietta Duraan 19 June 2008

Beautiful romantic poem with such sincere sentiments... it is well written as well - I am not a great fan of typical rhyme but you did this without any effort and it works for me.... thanks

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