Sunday, September 22, 2013
Next To Paradise Comments
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I’m a rhythm of sensation
Of the dust of the soil
I’m a feeling of the feelings
Of every speck of the dust
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Gajanan Mishra
22 September 2013
love and belief, thought and morality, good write, thanks.
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7/20/2025 9:17:36 PM # 1.0.0
good and nice just felt somelines are touchy i felt you should add more lines starting with you(many lines starts with i'm and we if some lines about what that' you' created magical experience) then the poem will be complete sorry to say but just felt (please sir this is my personal opinion)