Saturday, April 14, 2007

Next Time I Kiss A Woman Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this barroom,
They serve shots of despair
For alienated patrons to drink
And add further misery
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sandra Fowler 19 April 2007

One could not read this poem and remain unmoved. Compelling imagery, immeasurable sadness, and beauty that is truth indeed. World class, Uriah. Sandra

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Goldy Locks 14 April 2007

spending a little time between kisses, Uriah? I know the feeling. At the risk of saying too much, i was spoiled at college. Touching write (enthralling opening) ! Sus.

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Sadly beautiful....Vivid images...sobering tone(no pun intended) ...like the taste of metaphor employed..Quality stuff, Uriah... Still a Supporter, ......F.j.R.

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