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A very clever poem. Nice work and thanks for sharing. Karin Ånderson

good ending lines...the theme of the write is well lighted on here...good piece...10

great write! I like the last two lines how you finnished it up. thanks for sharing

This says a lot about time as we experience it, not knowing from one moment to the next what will happen. The first two lines sum it all up.

life comes with tons of suprises and some are good and some aren't but that can be the best part of life never knowing what'll happen next. great poem this ones going to my fav's.

A very cleverly written poem, thanks for sharing, 10 Lynda xx