Saturday, June 11, 2016

Newton's Law Comments

Rating: 5.0

Newton's Law

An apple falling
Before Newton's eye
...
Read full text

Bharati Nayak
COMMENTS
Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2018

A wonderful poem with scientific temper so useful and informative! Thanks dear Bharati Apa for sharing....10

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

Dear madam, I have read your many poems but this poem I feel special. You have cutely and astutely inscribed this poem as Newton's law. Very interesting.Thanks for shsring.

0 0 Reply
Queeny Gona 19 May 2017

Discovering the Universe through the existing power within oneself. Nicely penned dear Ma'am!

0 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar 21 March 2017

Beautiful poem on unique topic. Beautiful thoughts..power is there within you but it was noticed when it happened right in front of ones eyes. Quite a different poem. Loved it.

0 0 Reply
Hans Vr 20 January 2017

Excellent. These moments, these small eurekas, , wonderful events that give us a special insight. Thought provoking, very well written poem.

0 0 Reply
Michael Walker 29 September 2016

Academic poems like this one appeal to me. M.Walker.

0 0 Reply
Sriranji Aratisankar 05 September 2016

You have raised an ideal question. a momentt's intution' really can change the direction...But wisdon is latent power.. selh-accompliserd...thanks for sharing...

0 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 23 August 2016

Human observation and thinking is essential in bringing new thoughts. An interesting poem.

0 0 Reply
Susan Williams 28 June 2016

Bharati, you make me smile. You look out at the world and you make observations within the framework of that large and kind heart of yours and you have no fear in expressing them. Indeed, why should you? You and your poetry are the very stuff of what hope and love and gentleness and strength are made from. And so I smile, glad there is a Bharati in this world and I am acquainted with her through her words.

0 0 Reply
Dr.subhendu Kar 23 June 2016

The power The gravitation That is within you Finds an outlet To be part of the universe. gravity draws nearer to reel through unison as earth cradles fall on its musky lap to adore yet it never bounces back to soar alone apart just as speckles of blue flouncing through universe, wonderful write by the story of another world yet of love! most passionate write by the image, and it is unique.

0 0 Reply
Daniel Brick 22 June 2016

This is a poem of Bharati's Intuition. It's about that EUREKA MOMENT when a knotty problem is solved in a flash, or it could be an emotional impasse is suddenly overcome, or an idea magically appears just when it's needed. These are things your poem suggests to me by its use of the Newton story of discovery. I love the movement of this poem from Newton's experience which is the paradigm to many other circumstances. You name some of them: A MOMENT'S INTUITION, A CALLING, A GRAVITATION, etc. It's amazing what a big role discovery plays in our lives! And you one last discovery for the closing lines because this habit of discovery humanitypursues makes us truly PART OF THE UNIVERSE. You imply our lives are much larger than we thought.

0 0 Reply
Kishore Kumar Das 13 June 2016

Like an apple gravitates towards the earth, you are attracted to the Almighty by the gravitational force of self-realization...it is my perception.....thank you for sharing this poem...

0 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2016

Something unique! ! With the muse of love and life. Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Unnikrishnan E S 12 June 2016

Hi Bharati, It is said that the story about apple is fake. Never mind. But I do not agree with your lines, Had there been no apple fall on that day, human history would have been different. Apple or no apple, theory of gravitation would have been invented by Newton, for it is a natural sequel to Newton's laws of motion. But poetry is poetry and I respect the poet's wisdom.

0 0 Reply
Sekharan Pookkat 12 June 2016

discovery and invention- both are different thanks for sharing

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success