~ Newton ~ Einstein ~ Marx ~ Derrida ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 6,2010
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The building blocks of a modern society is all deeply rooted in one FACT....that is, 'Knowledge'..As always your poetry is as unique as you! ! 10
This poem contributes to the creation of good poetry. Thank you for sharing...
Your language invaded the universal problematic.... Give full marks for your Satire on Marx....epitomising him in a dialectical framework of loqua abundance The making-use of the surplus of meaning and the lack of a center in order to validate new frontiers of meaning.... A formidable task.. to club three intellectual giants of modern times.
This is absolutely modern in the choice of diction... Structure, sign and play..... not a title, this is what I want to tell about your poem.Perfection is reached and unreached. Things spoken and unspoken Logocentrism of your poem is wonderful....
Sorry readers. Due to severe web troubles, the 3rd sentence of my comment got distorted, it should read as: 'It is at the same time a reflection of the simultaneous human tendency both for fusion and disintegration.' Incovenience caused is regretted.
I think this is one of the best experimentations in modern poetry in recent times. The broken lines, incomplete sentences, vagueness of often contradictory scholastic theories - all constitute to make the poem a true replica of modern intellectual mind. It is also at the same time the human tendency for fusion and disintegration at the same time. I am not certain, the exact ideas the poetess had in mind while writing this but nevertheless as a very ordinary reader I think the poem has put me before the fractured personality of mankind as it is today.
Framing and filling with thoughts in unconventional way… Well in poetry vast esplanade remaining uncultivated to its full extent … Poetry can be research oriented blended with poetic emotion…so far I know such experiments are done in less number…here the poet has done that… Sizzlers with dash of both punch of knowledge…satire and poetic emotion…a sojourn… Indeed theories come and go…but …time wasted…where one can’t get and grab the right one…like fashion theories changes…like change of color of chameleon… all are not highly cerebrate so they become prey of such chameleon theories… 10++
Highly intriguing style and format of poetry! ! ! I salute your creativity and imagination! 10+++++
action learns to unlearn in opposite direction passion is what today just dispassionate tomorrow by time materialism by thesis and antithesis is dialectical dysfunction as when nihilism avows the surrealistic realism.........................fantastic exposition of scholastic views by deep erudition, i do enjoy the style and diction,10++, thanks for sharing
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An impressive thoughts to poetic verses and coined the scientic and philosophy brain masters.
Interesting two scientists and two philosophers …all of repute… Ways of learning are many … today’s flab facts are tomorrow’s tarter trash …and through it we’ve to pass … Learning is construction deconstruction [poet mentioned] no one can say final or whistle final...never possible…and poet wisely dissected both wise and pundit’s views… Toast of [? ] satire on Newton-Einstein-Marx-Derrida really enjoying 10++ Dr. V
Experiment makes and propels towards perfection…and we’ve this poet always edging to experimenting on poetry in myriad canvas and format e.g. Fusion Poetry [Ich bin ein Künstler] also writing in polyglot format… This poetry as commented by others done as contemplative one where she distillated many new things/thoughts of learning under one canopy…in glimpse [as here details will make the corpus heavy …in prose it is possible] Indeed theories are flooding and: ‘Burn in Learn/It’s my culmination! As conclusion…I than poet 10+++
really knowledgeable and interesting, , it's only understandable how much research has gone into writting it down.10++ for the research and 10++ for the write. thanks poet niv.
This poem confirms the author's depth and breadth of knowledge in many schools of thought. Great job Niv, a 10+++
A poem demanding a deal of study but nonetheless it all leads to the fact that nobody has all of the truth.Trouble is when a dictatorship takes over wielding their version of the truth to achieve their aims.
Actually, all the knowledge is deep inside but we search it outside due to our limited individual nature. Seen from its own sake, all the knowledge of this world has a meaning but our individual taste will decide which kind of knowledge is to be naturally absorbed. So, in a sense, the rest of all knowledge which fall outside the perimeter of our natural taste will be viewed as something unnatural, as something of a kind of waste and burden but since human nature is very wast, we can always find an Einstein, Newton, people like Marx, poets like you, writers like Twain, artists like Ravi Varma and so on. Hence, you need not bother on the subject on which you are presently dwelling. Within the stream of diversity, umpteen planes of human thoughts are possible. That means, Marx will be born again and again and if you cannot absorb him, leave him alone. That is the only solution. Christ will be born again and again and if you cannot absorb him, move away from him. That is the only solution. We can't destroy human nature and the volume of knowledge as such. We can only reform ourselves. We can only be selective from individual point of view.