News Poem by jan fuentez

News

Rating: 5.0


A news rings on my ear
Telling me that it's officially over
You have made your sacred vow
With her 'till the rest of your life
Honestly it was no shocked at all
Not even a surprise gesture
Perhaps I've been through
With that chapter
and i will not intend
To open it back once more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 04 January 2009

just a news... anything not more than that...short and crispy lines telling exactly what you intend to...good piece...10

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