Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Newness In Old View Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every moment says us and we feel
You see us from far abode galaxy
Beyond stars my mind swims fast
I have old view but newness dwells.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mihaela Pirjol 11 December 2018

A beautiful poem on the renewal of life, the cycle of life; on wisdom, truth, and spirituality: all essential elements for the sustenance of the spirit.

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Bharati Nayak 28 August 2016

'Every moment says us and we feel You see us from far abode galaxy Beyond stars my mind swims fast I have old view but newness dwells- - - Life is always changing.New experience, new insights enrich our life and we may change our our old point of view.Our conscience is our most trusted guide in life's journey.

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Valsa George 26 August 2016

Life renews itself...... Through old vistas, we see new sights! From a contented heart filled with love, when sights and scenes are viewed, they will acquire heavenly dimensions! A GREAT write! A full 10

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Abduhoo Salamath 24 August 2016

Getting eternal old wisdom we feel Definitely this cycle is in one path Newness is a blooming flower of life Old view still allows us to remember. great poem....excellent...very nice to read..

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Christopher Tye 24 August 2016

Wonderful poem so nice to read. Life and time two great constants in the universe.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

Beyond stars! Into another realm. Nice piece of work.

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M Asim Nehal 24 August 2016

Outstanding poem, some lines are awesome: : : In search of eternal ink we move We hope for the best art here. Newness is a blooming flower of life Old view still allows us to remember.

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Clarence Prince 24 August 2016

The old way has served its purpose, and so shall the new, both is very essential to life! Thanks for sharing, Kumarmani!

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