Saturday, October 5, 2019

Newness. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Behind this vale of tears is laughter,
behind the shadows, radiant light;
when this old world becomes the new,
when there's no wrong, but only right;
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dave lessard
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 October 2019

Write comment. Such a nice work, Dave. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Practicing Poetess 05 October 2019

A very good poem imparting hope. The overuse of commas was distracting, but the content of the poem was good.

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