Monday, March 13, 2017

Newly Fallen Rain Comments

Rating: 4.7

Raindrops glistening on tree leaves
Like diamonds in the sun,
Tiny little rivulets
Of water on the run,
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Varsha M 08 January 2021

Wow mesmering raindrops....just don't mop...play with the water. And enjoy..

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Tamara Beryl Latham 20 October 2019

Wonderfully penned observant poem about the aqueous downfall that forces us to hope that it will soon stop. I enjoyed the humorous ending. Thanks for posting. : -)

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Practicing Poetess 20 October 2019

Thank you, Tamara, for your positive and encouraging comment! : -)

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Michael Burch 02 October 2019

Nice poem! As a teenage poet I wrote a poem called " Damp Days" in which I complained about excessive rain.

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Practicing Poetess 02 October 2019

Thank you, Michael! : -)

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A B Faniki 07 September 2019

You have painted a nice image. I love it thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece.

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Practicing Poetess 07 September 2019

Thank you, A.B., for reading and for the lovely comment!

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Shaun Cronick 07 September 2019

Wonderful! This simply flows no pun intended. Brilliantly penned. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this. Rated 10+++ and added your good self and this superb poem to my Poet and poem favourite list. I thank you again. Take care.

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Practicing Poetess 07 September 2019

Thank you, dear Shaun. Both compliment AND pun accepted! : -)

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 June 2019

As I listen to the steady Drip and every drop, I begin to wonder if It's ever going to stop! .............../////////// beautiful poetic expression; beautiful poem

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Practicing Poetess 07 September 2019

Thank you, Mahtab, for such a high compliment!

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Prabir Gayen 02 May 2019

Finely written poem with good observation....///

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Thank you again, Prabir.

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Matthew Holloway 24 March 2019

a lovely flow and a big smile at then end thank you

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Practicing Poetess 24 March 2019

Thank you also, Matthew! : -)

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M Asim Nehal 20 February 2019

Superb poem, I am lost in my thoughts after reading this poem, spring, rain and silent love.10++++

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Practicing Poetess 20 February 2019

Thank you very much, Mohammed!

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Richard D Remler 16 February 2019

I'm looking forward to Spring and the rain she brings. All we have here is ice and snow. Loved the write, it flows wonderfully. And the play with words is a treat. Strikingly vivid. A memorable penning, and a fun read. Loved it.

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Practicing Poetess 16 February 2019

Wow, Thank you Richard for such a generous comment! : -)

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

Awesome expression... As I listen to the steady Drip and every drop, I begin to wonder if It's ever going to stop! Trees are bending in the wind Despite their soaking tops, My poor balcony's a mess, I'll have to get the mop! .., ....thanks

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Practicing Poetess 16 February 2019

Thanks again, Prabir!

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

Raindrops glistening on tree leaves Like diamonds in the sun, Tiny little rivulets Of water on the run, Rain cascades from gutters like A waterfall's begun, Instant birdbaths for the birds, They're having lots of fun....sweet poetic flow..

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Practicing Poetess 16 February 2019

Prabir, thank you so much...

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Carola Hume 14 February 2019

a lovely poem, & very observant of nature's activity! thanks for sharing.

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Practicing Poetess 15 February 2019

Thank you, Carola, for your appreciative comment!

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Carola Hume 15 February 2019

can you do me a favour & read on of my poems please? thanks, cheerio

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 January 2019

I love this marvelous poem...........10+++++++ Onto my poemslist....

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Practicing Poetess 21 January 2019

WOW, Thank you, Bernard! Nature poems are always a popular topic.

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Richard Wlodarski 26 December 2018

What a beautiful tribute to rain. Such vivid imagery. Made me think of the songs Raindrops Keep Falling On My Head; Raindrops; Rhythm of the Falling Rain. Love all 3! Thank you, dear poetess for the memories!

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Practicing Poetess 27 December 2018

Thank you, Richard, for such a positive comment! I have all 3 of the songs you just mentioned on an oldies playlist. Rain is a magical and soothing topic for poets and lyricists alike! : -)

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Rus Mer 25 November 2018

So nice rhythm.... Rain take no pain

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Practicing Poetess 26 November 2018

Thank you, Rus!

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Michael Walker 23 August 2018

'Raindrops glistening like diamonds'-fine imagery. The sound of rain falling appeals to me, but sometimes you have to get the mop.

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Practicing Poetess 27 August 2018

The listening is fun and relaxing. The mopping up after- - Not so much.

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Louis Rams 25 July 2018

before you get the mop to clean the balcony, look up again at such a beautiful sight to see.

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Thank you again, Louis for your kind, poetic comment.

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Louis Rams 31 May 2018

when you return from getting the mop, the sun will have reached the top, and dead in your tracks you will stop excellent write!

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Hahaha, enjoyed the humour in your rhyming comment! Thank you, Louis!

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alan brown 07 April 2018

loved the simpleness of your poem outstanding, enjoyed Alan

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Practicing Poetess 08 April 2018

Thank you, Alan! I appreciate your complimentary comment!

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