Newflame 2 Comments

I sigh every time I read this poem. I know what it is like to have every thought consumed by another person. The longing feelings are so intense and hard to contain on the inside, that you feel they must be showing on the outside, despite your hardest efforts to conceal them. I love this poem almost as much as I love you.

I like this side of you Mr. Ransom. More vulnerable. You really communicated your feelings in this one. Keep up the good work. I look foward to more from you.

I really like when you say 'she has become like a color or a letter of the alphabet'. Beautiful and poignant. Any woman would love to be the subject of that poem.