New York City-Part Two Comments

very good....never been to NY, but lived in a smaller city most of my life, now a country girl, and it is all the same...

reading these poems, i got to know what the city is like...

The two-part poem gives a wonderful picturesque of New York City. A fine job!

a fine literary piece! ............

Nice poetic expression nice flow good job

And since you have thrown that out it won't be back to you... it knows its worth, and perhaps somebody else will pick it up even if you think rubbish on the street is where it belongs... Slander is a crime - it does lack an ID and credibility when it spreads hateful lies...

You've caputured the aura of New York, very well. You deserve a 10/10.

A very good job and you focused the camera on the dark side, sad indeed. Good, bad and ugly lies on the same foundation.

Both New York City's Felonious Crime, and Homeless rate have gone down significantly under Mayor Mike Bloomberg. Still these problem exists....That said, if you consider that this is a city of 10 million people....larger in populus than most countries... we're not doing such a bad job....Good Write.... Solid Crafting!