Friday, January 1, 2016

New Years Pledge Comments

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The shining beam of sunlight pierces my eyes,
Forcing my lids to open wide.
First thought in my mind,
Not only is this a new day;
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Melissa L Tamayo
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Anil Kumar Panda 05 January 2016

Very nice resolutions for the coming new year. Liked it.

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Melissa Tamayo 31 January 2016

Anil Kumar Panda, thank you. I'm happy to share

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 January 2016

The shining beam of sunlight pierces my eyes, Forcing my lids to open wide....Very wise and interesting drafting shared in this forum. Amazing poem.10

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Melissa Tamayo 31 January 2016

Kumarmani Mahakul, your kind words encourage me to continue writing. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I'm glad to share....

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Melissa L Tamayo

Melissa L Tamayo

Bronx, NY
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