Sunday, January 3, 2010

New Year's Tears Comments

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You stood me up.
And you don't even offer an excuse.
I call. You don't answer.
Your texts on New Year's Eve stopped the moment I said
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Beth Bailey
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Afzal Shauq 09 January 2010

realistic approach with sweet idea 10/10

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 03 January 2010

Strong. acerbic, resolute. The arrangement is free but it flowss with intensity of emotions, not forced - just plain truth. You managed to put it all together well!

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Suchitra Suchi 03 January 2010

Not everyone's new year is Good.. But every new year brings something new in life, teaches something new every time.. A good poem..

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