Friday, May 4, 2012

New Year's Eve Midnight Comments

Rating: 4.4

There is excitement in the air
Hearts are bubbling with joy and light
We feel the Death that is near
And we sit in wait wit smiles wide and bright.
...
Read full text

Goddy Nana Mens
COMMENTS
Briana Mackenzei 08 June 2012

like it it is so amazing this is one of my favorite poems

0 0 Reply
Kelly Passion 16 May 2012

sweet and intense......That is a nice one....

0 0 Reply
Liliana Roman 08 May 2012

i love the last line. it reminds me of when i hold grudges on people. who lives longer? me or the year?

0 0 Reply
Amy Lalala 05 May 2012

The final line was absolutely fantastic! I like the poem!

0 0 Reply
Devin Lasker 05 May 2012

I really like it. It's a good poem. The rhyming flows well. Good job

0 0 Reply
Dave Walker 04 May 2012

Like it love the ending. A great poem.

0 0 Reply
Valerie Dohren 04 May 2012

Very good poem, well written and rhymed.

0 0 Reply
Vijay Sai R 04 May 2012

very enterprising poem...cheers

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success