Monday, December 28, 2015

New Year's Eve Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dead of night: it's freezing cold;
street light glints eerily
through a dense cover of fog.
A queue of homeless people
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Ajit Das
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Edmund Strolis 29 December 2015

Within your expressions a tinge of hope exists. That makes your writing well rounded. smallest amount of hope is necessary otherwise we can surrender to hopelessness and make excuses for indifference. Some writers may list a page of negative observations, done easily enough but hope for even the smallest relief from suffering is a seed and a beacon we must never surrender.

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