Thursday, December 7, 2017

New Year's Day Comments

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Old dreams and desires melt with the snow,
On this day that brims with significance.
As I look deep into the world's eyes aglow;
Blessed by the sun of new born awareness;
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Shaun Cronick 03 October 2020

Hopes and aspirations abound in your well woven and sublimely colourfully well written poem. You seem to have a knack Dominic in how to get into a poetry reader's head/mind and bestow the poetic goods. To impart colours and themes through your poetry and like all good poetry they thankfully linger. Five stars and richly deserved. Take care and many thanks.

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